Planet Cosmo
By Georgia
You are opening your eyes for the first time, born into a new world. The skies are a beautiful light purple, there are candy cane trees, and it’s 70 degrees all the time no matter the season. Everyone is really nice there and we all wear medieval looking clothing.
The name of this planet is Cosmo. Beautiful Cosmo. Cosmo of the whirlpool galaxy. Everything is pretty here. People are nice, birthdays are important, people stop physically aging after age 30, and people don’t die of old age.
School here is fun. We don’t have tests but we learn the topic in a hands-on way. There is no money here and everyone shares everything they need. But nothing is perfect. We still have evil on this planet. We learn self defense because of this. In fact, it’s required.
This planet has a lot of taste. The food here tastes just like all of earth’s, the trees are candy cane with cotton candy trees, bushes grow delicious sweet berries, the candy grows on trees, and the water changes taste every sip. You may think this is unhealthy, but here candy is good for you.
Here we don’t have cars; we use horses and animals to help us get places even though we live with futuristic technology. With this technology, we just use it for our needs and a few wants without hurting the planet.
The medicine here is amazing. It’s 100 years ahead of earth. Even though we have good medicine, we don’t get sick easily. There are no viruses, flu, COVID-19, and other illnesses like those.
Cosmo is the most beautiful thing you will see. The whole planet looks like a meadow with mountains emerging from the ground. Trees everywhere you look. We don’t want to ruin this beautiful planet, so we figured out how to make anything that is disposable, compostable. And if we can’t, we’ll throw it into space.
The days here are 30 hrs long and one year is 291 days. At night, you will always be able to see the stars and at least one of the two moons. Everything changes at night, the pink cotton candy on the trees turns into a baby blue. The clear blue water turns into a beautiful deep purple. The lush trees grass changes into a majestic blue During the day, the sun is a blinding blue color. Here the sun won’t hurt your eyes if you look at it.
Everything is peaceful. No racism. No sexism. People get along great.
Georgia-
I really liked your digital drawing and the details you put into your writing! Great job!